Thursday, January 21, 2010
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German rose to prominence in the early 16th century when Martin Luther provided all of Europe’s peasants with their own bible, almost all of them published in a dialect called “Sächsische Kanzleisprache”. It took several years of Church warring with peasants for the German People to take matters into their own hands and establish a so called “Standardized German” a set of spelling and pronunciation rules everyone would follow. Titled “Hochdeutsch” or “High German” it would become the standard of speech even though hardly anyone in Germany could actually speak it. Regional dialects had branched out so far that they hardly remained recognizable as offshoots from the original language tree. However, like the stereotypical images of engineering and manufacturing (which Germans do take very seriously, by the way) Germans fastidiously adhered to the new rules until the language had taken at least a semblance of a hold in all parts of the country. And, as Germans despise being out of the spotlight, the language rose to prominence largely due to the fact that they high-stepped around large parts of Europe speaking it for a good 10 years in the early to mid 20th century. In fact, videos of Hitler giving speeches remain sources of awe and, yes, revulsion largely because of the language he is speaking. “That sounds so mean!” someone will exclaim. (Anyone can give a speech, but not a person can make it sound so fiendish).
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I really enjoyed this piece. I especially liked when you mentioned some of your personal experiences along with the information you gave. Those two parts of the story could have had a bit more of a connection between the two, but overall, I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised you decided to post this excerpt of the piece. I think I understand what you're trying to do by including the history. I think that you're trying to show how angry the German language can sound, but the excerpt doesn't really do that. I think that in order for this part of the piece to be relevant it needs to do more than tell the reader how German came to be.
ReplyDeleteAnd I could be totally wrong with why you wanted to include the history...but I don't see a clear relevance to the rest of the piece. You have some nice lines in here, though. You have spurts of wittiness which make the piece lighter. For example, I like the line "And, as Germans despise being out of the spotlight..." It's not in the excerpt, but I also really like the line "My father was among the last to come, puncutal as the European..." It's just so witty that the reader can't help but smile.
I honestly liked the entire thing. I guess it's because it is so relevant to me since I have been goggling at your phone conversations with your parents on the bus coming back from basketball games. Although there is a nice brief history of the language, I think the personal stuff is the most interesting since I have no idea what it is like to be asked to say something in another language. I am sure you have other good personal stories (maybe going through an airport or something) so use those your strong points. Loved it though.
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